Comments for Wolfpack Press

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #2 by Marea Detzler

Marea Detzler — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:45:20 +0000

I feel that this essay is the best because of how persuasive it is. She does a good job of transitioning between paragraphs. She also has a lot of good facts. She also does a good job of countering points against her view. Great grammer is also in this paper.

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #2 by Lukas Mooney

Lukas Mooney — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:37:51 +0000

Rated M for Murder is the better choice for me. I say this because our time were living in now can relate to how technology can take over a person’s life. They used examples of recent events to make it more persuasive. The person made good examples that related well to the topic.

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #2 by Madisyn

Madisyn — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:30:37 +0000

This essay had a very intriging intro and evidence. Hr.6

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #2 by Tom T.

Tom T. — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:29:38 +0000

Very well written with a strong and interesting topic that reeled you in from the begining with interesting stories and facts.

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #2 by Nick Perry

Nick Perry — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:28:40 +0000

Paper #2, Rated M for Murder, deserves to win the smack down for several reasons. It flowed very nicely throughout the entire paper. It was very persuasive. It had alot of text support to the main points.

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #2 by Stephanie Estrada

Stephanie Estrada — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:26:36 +0000

i voted for essay 2 because of its facts, and because it a good job at defeteing the opposing side agains video game violence.

Comment on Persuasive Essay Smackdown! #1 by Athena

Athena — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:26:10 +0000

This essay has the most persuasive evidence.

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #2 by Alyson Smith

Alyson Smith — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:22:10 +0000

this paper should win. it has a really good intro paragraph that keeps you wanting to read more. It gives a lot of evidence that makes you interested in the topic. the paper also makes you think a lot about the point the writer is making.

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #2 by Hope Tweet-Cook

Hope Tweet-Cook — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:21:19 +0000

This one should win because it has a creative title, well written paragraphs and very persuasive language.

Comment on Research Smackdown Essay #3 by Liz Schwanke

Liz Schwanke — Mon, 27 Feb 2012 20:20:52 +0000

Persausive essay #3 was an excellent essay. It had great flow and there were no “bumps” while reading it. Also, it was very clear and easy to understand. This essay was very well written. It was evident that the author knew what she/he was talking about.